Stick = Bad/ Blam
Well you have good skill at projecting motion and i can tell you spent alot of time making it smooth, good job.
if you want to make it better try editing voices in any old sound editing prograhm, dont do subtitles like u did put them where ever they will be out of the animation and you should defenalty re-do your dawn to night transitions they were a bit rough and last but not least try not to make it that long if possible. Great work
look forward to your future summisions.
thank you kind sir.
you got good flash skills but i honestly think the guy who wrote saw should be locked away because he is a wacko.
Thanks man. I've worked fairly hard on it. Heh the guy who did write saw is pretty different... but thats what makes the world go round? Right?
Thanks for the review.
Great job this was really a good flash, keep up the good work.
looking forward to you next flash
haha not bad
HAHA NINJA CANDY CORN RUN FOR YOUR LIFE, good job look forward to the real thing.
WOW i'm quite impressed, you have alot of promise. now i dont know if any one else will notice so i'll say it, that palm tree as an example shows how good your drawing ability is. (look forward to future summisions)
The end thing was funny where you were going "wtf are you still doing here" but anyway yea if you are ever going to have the eyes show over the hair like you did make the parts of the eye that would touch the hair transparent to get a really nice affect.
(you show promise kid)
Well, thanks. Hmm. I usualy have the eyes just over the hair, but the eyes transparent would cause a problem, too much time coloring.
Stupid frame-by-frame obsessesion I have. Ah well. Thanks for the support.
Great job bud it's nice to see a friend start a flash and watch him work through the whole thing to see the final product your getting really good, keep up the great work.
Well buddy thanks for the great review
even though my Sound FX always get screwed up :(
i hope to see YOU hand in an animation sometime.
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