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Stick = Bad/ Blam

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Well you have good skill at projecting motion and i can tell you spent alot of time making it smooth, good job.
if you want to make it better try editing voices in any old sound editing prograhm, dont do subtitles like u did put them where ever they will be out of the animation and you should defenalty re-do your dawn to night transitions they were a bit rough and last but not least try not to make it that long if possible. Great work
look forward to your future summisions.

hey

you got good flash skills but i honestly think the guy who wrote saw should be locked away because he is a wacko.

great job

It is a crystal clear sound and had a beat that is really calm yet easy to get into, great job keep up the good work.